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Sakata, Gintoki
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20091201
Sakata, Gintoki
GENERAL INFO
Name:Sakata, Gintoki (Gin-san)
Age:21
Height:6,8"
Weight:167 lbs
Ninja ID: ???
Village:Leaf
Rank:Genin
Element:Fire
Ninja Type: ???
Occupation: Freelancer
BIO:Gintoki was 15 when the final great ninja war was declared. He was being trained by the samurai in the art of the sword. Even though he was a samurai he joined the ranks of the ninja along with two of his fellow students and best friends.His teacher joined the war and was killed.After hearing this news he and his fellow students joined the war.Gintoki survived the war but his best friends did not.He lives alone in the leaf village still living by his samurai code.His buisness is "Odd jobs Gin" where he does anything for money.
Description: Has silver, naturally curly hair, a black and red jumpsuit with a white coat with blue swirling pattern covering that.
Personality: Gintoki has naturally permed silver hair, which he blames for his lack of a love-life.Gintoki has a sweet tooth and obsession with sugary, sweet foods such as parfait, ice cream, strawberry milk and cake. However, Gintoki has been warned by his Doctor to control his sugar intake.Despite his appearance and initial behavior, Gintoki has a great amount of pride for the old bushido code. He takes it upon himself to rescue or avenge not only his comrades and friends but also people he barely knows. Despite being a fearsome fighter with nearly unmatched skills, he avoids needless bloodshed after suffering the loss of most of his friends and allies during the great ninja war.(The oone that Tobi declared on all the nations.)
OTHER INFO
Family: Shiori Fujita- Younger Sister
Sensei:N/A
Students:N/A
Team:N/A
Weaknesses:Sugar-Hes on the verge of diabetes but also has hypoglycemia.
Long Range fighting.
Strengths:Friends and Family, his bushido.
Jutsu:
Bloodline:None
RP Sample:" Byakuran sat back on the couch in disgust
"I don't hurt women.....don't make me do that again...." "
(Sorry....my rp style is short and sweet)
Name:Sakata, Gintoki (Gin-san)
Age:21
Height:6,8"
Weight:167 lbs
Ninja ID: ???
Village:Leaf
Rank:Genin
Element:Fire
Ninja Type: ???
Occupation: Freelancer
BIO:Gintoki was 15 when the final great ninja war was declared. He was being trained by the samurai in the art of the sword. Even though he was a samurai he joined the ranks of the ninja along with two of his fellow students and best friends.His teacher joined the war and was killed.After hearing this news he and his fellow students joined the war.Gintoki survived the war but his best friends did not.He lives alone in the leaf village still living by his samurai code.His buisness is "Odd jobs Gin" where he does anything for money.
Description: Has silver, naturally curly hair, a black and red jumpsuit with a white coat with blue swirling pattern covering that.
Personality: Gintoki has naturally permed silver hair, which he blames for his lack of a love-life.Gintoki has a sweet tooth and obsession with sugary, sweet foods such as parfait, ice cream, strawberry milk and cake. However, Gintoki has been warned by his Doctor to control his sugar intake.Despite his appearance and initial behavior, Gintoki has a great amount of pride for the old bushido code. He takes it upon himself to rescue or avenge not only his comrades and friends but also people he barely knows. Despite being a fearsome fighter with nearly unmatched skills, he avoids needless bloodshed after suffering the loss of most of his friends and allies during the great ninja war.(The oone that Tobi declared on all the nations.)
OTHER INFO
Family: Shiori Fujita- Younger Sister
Sensei:N/A
Students:N/A
Team:N/A
Weaknesses:Sugar-Hes on the verge of diabetes but also has hypoglycemia.
Long Range fighting.
Strengths:Friends and Family, his bushido.
Jutsu:
- Bunshin No Jutsu - Replication Technique
- Henge No Jutsu - Transformation Technique
- Kawarimi No Jutsu - Body Replacement Technique
Bloodline:None
RP Sample:" Byakuran sat back on the couch in disgust
"I don't hurt women.....don't make me do that again...." "
(Sorry....my rp style is short and sweet)
Sogo Okita- Member
- Posts : 5
Ninja Rep : 0
Join date : 2009-12-01
Sakata, Gintoki :: Comments
Denied
Nothing makes sense about this character and all characters have to start out as academy students.
Our story takes place 50 years after naruto ascends from kageship.
Plus we would like to see a longer rp sample.
Nothing makes sense about this character and all characters have to start out as academy students.
Our story takes place 50 years after naruto ascends from kageship.
Plus we would like to see a longer rp sample.
Oi we don't know how long the war that Tobi started lasted...I'm just assuming it lasted about 70 years.....but I guess I'll do it over again....because you said please...oh wait you didnt even say please.....how rude.....= =
Sorry but here let me say in a better phrase going through each part for you so you may get a better understanding of the character template.
-Okay for your age, 21 is way over genin normal age. Plus the age limit that you can choose at is right now currently 10-13. You choosen 13 in the beginning I notice so you put 13 down as your age in the age area.
-For your village please put blank at the moment for we don't even have leaf village anymore. That doesn't exist in our story.
-For your rank, everyone who joins starts out as academy student, there are no higher ranks at the moment here.
-Your bio should point out the neccesarilys like who your family was, how you found out and got to the academy, just make it seem like a academy student bio. Look at other characters for example.
-As a suggestion your should mention whether your parents are dead or not...
-Your weaknesses and strengthes don't make much sense to me but I don't really know how to address those except they should be focus on maybe how good or bad your willpower is. are you open minded? or are you more good in your endurance of lifting things. Stuff that protians towards your major expertness.
-Rp sample should be longer because otherwise you might end up being put in rp school for a few weeks before you go into the ninja academy.
Oh for your ninja type thats what you should have choosen in the beginning. Which would be off. taijutsu expert you would put in there. Also for your element you are allow to choose of one more element to learn.
I hope this helps you hehe?
-Okay for your age, 21 is way over genin normal age. Plus the age limit that you can choose at is right now currently 10-13. You choosen 13 in the beginning I notice so you put 13 down as your age in the age area.
-For your village please put blank at the moment for we don't even have leaf village anymore. That doesn't exist in our story.
-For your rank, everyone who joins starts out as academy student, there are no higher ranks at the moment here.
-Your bio should point out the neccesarilys like who your family was, how you found out and got to the academy, just make it seem like a academy student bio. Look at other characters for example.
-As a suggestion your should mention whether your parents are dead or not...
-Your weaknesses and strengthes don't make much sense to me but I don't really know how to address those except they should be focus on maybe how good or bad your willpower is. are you open minded? or are you more good in your endurance of lifting things. Stuff that protians towards your major expertness.
-Rp sample should be longer because otherwise you might end up being put in rp school for a few weeks before you go into the ninja academy.
Oh for your ninja type thats what you should have choosen in the beginning. Which would be off. taijutsu expert you would put in there. Also for your element you are allow to choose of one more element to learn.
I hope this helps you hehe?
If I get permission from Eman could I do whatever I want in meh profile.....cause I hate bein like everyone else......^^'
No, and that's final, please make the changes pointed out otherwise your profile will not be accepted.
Let me make it clear, I don't give special permission to anyone to be above anyone else, including myself. Please follow what the global admins and mods have told you. I hope I will not have to repeat myself.
I'm not trying to be strict. I just don't want my reputation ruined because I let my friends do whatever they wanted while everyone else followed the rules. So i'm sorry if I seem strict but thats how it goes.
I understand~I'm just messin with ya I'll make everything in meh profile good in a bit
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