Kira Satetsu

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GENERAL INFO

Name:

Age: 13

Height: 1,70
Weight: 45kg

Ninja ID: 6234-567A-BC8D-9EFG

Village: Time

Rank: Genin

Element Magnetism (Bloodline Element), Lightning (Main Element)

Occupation: None

BIO
Personality
Kira's personality is different from most,he seems playful and naive on the surface but in battle He is very sadistic
in his way of maiming/slaughtering. He seems to find this very enjoyable.

Academy Arc
As any other ninja, Kira studied in the villages academy. he showed to be a quick studied easily mastering the basic ninja arts.
And his bloodline manifested at young age. Kira was trained well in the ways of the clan by his parents.
Kira's nickname became "The Genius of the Iron Sand", and was acknowledged as a true genius by his fellow classmates and the teachers.
he participated in the local Dojo, and strived to master the art of the blade, and he trained harder then anyone else at the dojo.
The other kids at the same age as him was no match for him and he became arrogant and took pride in his swordsmanship, he even defeated some of the adults.
Then a kid named "Ace" joined the dojo he was one year older then Kira, and he challenged Kira to a fight at the dojo.
Ace won over Kira with little effort.

Kira became obsessed with beating his new rival, training his skills as a swordman to the limit, of what a kids body his age could take,
two years passed as Kira became eight he passed the academy but he hadn’t forgot his goal to beat his rival.



Genin Arc
As Kira became a genin he was assigned to a team like any other ninja, his teacher thought him how to use lightning chakra.
as a natural Genius he mastered this quickly but it still took him some time. he completed countless missions along with his team.
as time went he kept hoeing his skills, and at the age of 12 he challenged Ace to a last duel with real swords, they battled for hours
under the moon, until finally Kira won and spared his life. During a ride made by a group of high ranked rogues, Ace went into the heat of the raid but was overpowered and killed.
Even tho Ace had been Kiras rival they had becomed friends during the years and in wild rage he slaughtered the rogues thus starting his path of blood.

OTHER INFO

Family: None.

Sensei: None.

Students: None.

Team: None.

Weaknesses: Hates royalty, arrogant people, Hates Water.

Strengths: Bloodline Limit, Lightning Mastery, High Speed, Endurance.

Jutsu:

Satetsu - Iron Sand
Art: Ninjutsu
Rank: E
Type: Supplementary
Damage: 0&
Chakra: 3%
Description: Using the Iron Sand, the user can form it into any weapon they need. The weapon will break after use.
Limit: Satetsu User.

Satetsu Shigure - Iron Sand Autumnal Showers
Art: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Close (0-5m), Mid (5-10m)
Chakra: 15%
Damage: 1-45%
Description: Using their body’s special ability to change his chakra into a magnetic field, the user will form the sand into small piercing clumps, which can rain down on an opponent. Because of the deadliness of the attack, a ninja must do all they can to avoid it, rather than make any attempt to block it.
Limit: Satetsu User.


Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique
Art: Ninjutsu
Rank:C
Type: Supplementary Modifier
Chakra: 2%
Damage: None
Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement, the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.


The Storm Road
Rank: C-Rank
Damage: 1-45%
Type: Taijutsu
Chakra: 2% per post
Description: The Storm road is Kiras signature fighting style, involving high speed movements combined with Lightning chakra to enchance the strength and speed of the user
to create deadly attacks.The storm road has shown some similaritys to Taekwondo and Jujitsu.The fighting style features a projectile technique in which the user kicks out at very high speeds and strength,
sending out a sharp "air blade" that can slice objects and greatly damage a human body. but the style isnt all kicking it also involves a technique in which the user pushes their finger into a certain target at very high speed,
leaving a wound similar to a bullet wound.

Bloodline & Abilitys: Satetsu

A bloodline that has recently been discovered. Although they are small in numbers and little knowledge is presently known, those with the Satetsu bloodline are able to create and manipulate iron sand with their unique ability to convert their own chakra into a magnetic field. Similar to the Sandaime Kazekage of Sunagakure, they have been classified as a dangerous group of people.
Kekkai Genkai: Satetsu, Iron Sand Users, can change their chakra into a magnetic field that can manipulate small sand-like particles of iron. The user will generally retain the iron sand within their stomach, expelling it from their mouth when necessary. They may also draw iron particles from out of the ground.

Lightning Mastery Technique
Rank: E-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: 2% per post
Damage: 1-45%
Description: Lightning Mastery Techniques is used by Lightning users to harness the electricity in the atmosphere
around them, theres several ways the technique can be used, Taijutsu users often uses it to enchance their speed
and strength while ninjutsu masters, often uses it to create to generate electric arcs of varying intensity and hit their target precisely


RP Sample:

Spoiler:

[Guest]

eeer 45 pounds?

[Guest]

no 45kg

[Guest]

45 kg is i believe 119 pounds.

So approved.

And lightning Mastery as i read is more of a ability, so you can move that to abilities and have one more jutsu lol

[Guest]

Bump x]

[Kaito Daichi]

Approved o.O

[Kasai Odoriko]

Well he needs to make an rp sample so I can do my job...so yea...even though I can't override his decision I might suggest unapproving.

[Kaito Daichi]

If you noticed, the date of my post, it was before 2.0 when I approved it.

[Kasai Odoriko]

Yes old man but it still doesn't change the fact it needs to be unapproved XD

[Kaito Daichi]

Its not in the approved sections, is it? SO obviously it still needs to be reapproved.

[Guest]

added it, not the best iv made but yeah

[Kasai Odoriko]

Length:Length is good. Not the best but I can't ask for too much. Try typing it in paragraph form still with the discussions in parenthesis. It shows the true length rather than the style you did it in, which makes it seem larger than what it really would be. 7/10

Quality:The quality is nice. Theres only the slight habit you have of not capitalizing the beginning of your words at the beginning of your sentences and a few minor mispellings but nothing big 6/10

Description:The description even though written in a form I don't favor was rather nice. It was maintained without being over applied or having too less. I think you could have done better in an actual paragraph form instead of writing it out like that but meh I can't ask for too much. 7/10

POV:Point of view changed alot, which is a good cause for this kind of posting to be done in paragraph form. This type often requires that a person switch POV's and this can cause confusion alot. 4/10

24/40: B

Approved by Kasai Odoriko at Genin Level Rp.

[Kaito Daichi]

I thought it was out of a hundred? o.O

[NG Admin]

well 24/40 is more than 55 percent so he's good anyway

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